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FIC: The Very Small Girl and the Monster

Title: The Very Small Girl and the Monster
Words / rating: 2100 words / PG
Fandom: Firefly/BtVS crossover
Characters: River, Spike (w/background Spuffy)
Spoilers: For all of both shows

This is another Christmas/birthday fic, because it's penny_lane_42's birthday tomorrow! Happy birthday! The reason it's way longer than most of the giftfics is because I had the idea at least six months ago and it's been sitting around half-written ever since. If the reader is so inclined, it can be considered a sequel-in-spirit to my drabble Auld Lang Syne. (Lauren, do you remember that conversation?)

There are lots of things River still doesn’t tell Simon.Collapse )

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ghostyouknow27
Feb. 11th, 2012 07:49 pm (UTC)
Somehow, I had missed this one.

But it's lovely and atmospheric and there are *wonderful* lines.

I loved this: "By the bulge of it she knows there’s a pistol strapped into an inside pocket. It’s funny, she thinks, the different shapes trust comes in."

and

"He’s such a fragile monster."

and this one might be the best River-voice ever?

"She listened to the captain making this agreement; physicality is almost certain. Teeth also a high probability."

(even though I read this whole thing waiting to find Matilda, I enjoyed it! *g*).
snickfic
Feb. 11th, 2012 08:25 pm (UTC)
Oooh, I love it when people quote lines back to me. :) I really enjoy writing River-voice, so I'm glad they rang true for you, too.

(even though I read this whole thing waiting to find Matilda, I enjoyed it! *g*).

*facepalm* You know, I ended up writing the bulk of that linky post *twice,* and I think did that the first time, too, but caught myself. If you're still looking for the Matilda fic, it's here.
tifaching
May. 31st, 2014 01:20 am (UTC)
“Spike?” She calls him by name again because when someone is hungry you feed them. I loved this whole story, your River voice was fantastic, but this line right here caught me. What a perfect thought.

snickfic
May. 31st, 2014 04:24 pm (UTC)
Oh man, I love hearing what particular lines work for people. Thank you so much!
ever_neutral
Jun. 4th, 2014 09:10 am (UTC)
For some reason I had not read this before! I like it a lot! River is very River and Spike is very Spike and somehow they mesh very well in the same universe. The very small girl and the monster indeed. What a good.
snickfic
Jun. 5th, 2014 04:57 pm (UTC)
Yay. I am glad you enjoyed it. <3
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